Review of My Brother’s Crown

My Brother's Crown

Two cousins, separated by generations, must save their family’s legacy. Will they succeed? Or will the burden they are called to carry be too much to bear?

As a fan of historical fiction, My Brother’s Crown intrigued me from the beginning. Not knowing much about the persecution of French Protestants it seemed to be an entertaining way to inform myself. I was not disappointed.

The setting of My Brother’s Crown takes place in two diverse locations: present-day Virginia and seventeenth century France during Louis X1V’s reign. The Huguenots, who had enjoyed some religious freedom in a Catholic country, are now feeling the pressure of persecution. From page one, the reader is immediately immersed in the privation of these Christians as they try to escape to freedom. Although the authors take some liberties with the setting and the events surrounding the historical plot, they should be credited with alerting readers to those liberties. The present-day setting is also fascinating as the backdrop of the story. However, it lacks some of the picturesque detail of the plot in the past.

My Brother’s Crown is told through two points of view: those of Rene (present) and Catherine (past). Each is a strong woman determined to overcome the obstacles placed in her path. However, the characters in Catherine’s story are much more sympathetic and believable, while those around Rene seem immature and superficial despite an interesting storyline.

Though the two storylines take place 350 years apart, they switch seamlessly with each other, and a suspenseful tone is carried throughout the book. However, the suspense in the historical plotline is much more effective than in the present-day one.

In My Brother’s Crown, the plot and conflict are driven by the characters’ actions and external events, which lead to internal struggles and incredibly hard choices. The conflicts in the story allow for deep growth in the historical characters, while the cotemporary ones remain flat and inexplicably unchanged. This strange dichotomy continues in the romantic angle. The love story in the historical plot is used to deepen the characters’ relationships and grow together while the present-day romance is simplistic and unrealistic as if the contemporary plot needed another subplot, so two characters are thrown together to put more intrigue in the story. The dichotomy occurs again as the story ends. The seventeenth century storyline is exquisitely written with a satisfying climax. Although the present-day plot is suspenseful, it lacks depth, feels rushed, confusingly incomplete, and the murder mystery remains unsolved at the end, even though the authors are laying the groundwork for a sequel.

The spiritual message in the novel is strong and unmistakable. But, as with the rest of the novel, it is communicated more effectively in the storyline of the past because the characters’ faith is shown to be genuine by the way they conduct themselves through various trials.

My Brother’s Crown is a stand-alone novel and is the first in Mindy Starnes Clark’s and Leslie Gould’s Cousins of the Dove series. The book is geared toward Christian women who like historical fiction and contemporary romance with a little mystery thrown in. There is a murder scene in the contemporary plot that could bother some readers.

The historical plotline is almost enough to make up for the contemporary plotline’s shortcomings, and My Brother’s Crown is still a good story.


I was given a free copy from the publisher in exchange for my honest review.


About Katherine Wacker

Katherine Wacker is currently a reviewer for Bethany House Publishers, and Howard Books. She is a Craftsman graduate of the Jerry B. Jenkins Christian Writer’s Guild. She holds a B.A in History from San Diego State-Imperial Valley Campus. In her spare time she likes to read books, watch sports, and do jigsaw puzzles. She lives at home with her parents and three dogs, Charlie, Roscoe and Daisy.
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